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Friday, January 25, 2008

Manifesto Game Time

Please read the below paragraph.

Wearing a black, leather biker jacket, black polo shirt and faded blue jeans and with his long hair pulled back in tightly braided dreadlocks, Omar bin Laden, 26, spoke via satellite from Cairo with his 52-year-old British wife at his side. The fourth-oldest son of the world’s most wanted man has recently been in the media, saying he wants to use his name to be an “ambassador for peace” between Islam and the West. While he has renounced his father’s methods, he does not call him a terrorist. [source]

There are three things wrong with this paragraph in both wording and content. Hit me back with the three things that made you go 'Hmmm' and if it matches my list then a bottle of Manifesto wine will be coming your way. It’s not that hard. Re-read it and every time you either go “whaaaa?” or suck your teeth, take note of it. Ready? Go!

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Anonymous Anonymous said...

black, leather biker jacket, black polo shirt and faded blue jeans and with his long hair pulled back in tightly braided dreadlocks,

52-year-old British wife at his side.

an “ambassador for peace” between Islam and the West.

9:48 AM  

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